Showing posts with label Novel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Novel. Show all posts

Wednesday, 27 August 2014

A Wild Book Appears



It is weird seeing your book printed out for the first time.  You know you’ve written a lot of words, but to see the chunk of paper that it takes up really brings it home.

You hold it, hefting its weight and think “finally, it’s done.”

But of course, it’s not done.  It’s nowhere near done.

At this point I’d like to thank to my test readers, who each took away a small tree’s worth of paper and spent their free time reading those words that I’ve written.  Your feedback has been great – and I’ve been happy to hear that you all enjoyed the book despite those spelling and grammatical errors which I managed to read over a hundred times and not spot.

I’ve had the recent task of going through that feedback – correcting those spellings, removing those extra commas… (well some of them – there is an ongoing debate about the use of the Oxford comma!) and in some cases rewriting scenes to add a little more depth or clarity.

Some of it has been fun (some typos created some very unintentionally funny sentences), some has been frustrating (we all have days where we just can’t think of a different way to phrase something), but overall it has been rewarding to see the story having the rough edges knocked off.

Not much more work to do before I try my hand at sending it out to publishers.  It’s hard to know when it’s ready, because as the saying goes “A work of art is never finished, only abandoned.” 
It’s scary, but I guess I’ll just have to send it and see what happens.

Friday, 22 February 2013

The Book vs The Movie



If you haven’t read/seen The Lord of the Rings, go read/watch it now.  Honestly, how have you not at least seen the movies, even if you haven’t read the books?  Go on.  I’ll wait.

Here is a song,
About reading a book,
I’ve given you a warning,
Not to look,
If you haven’t read it,
And italics you skip,
Just be aware,
Plot spoilers may be slipped.

Ok.

Many years ago, I read The Lord of the Rings trilogy.  Then they made some movies based on the books.  I saw the movies.  I liked them.  Since then, I’ve watched them a few times.
This year when I was looking for my next book to read, I came across The Fellowship of the Ring again, and thought “I wonder if I remember it, or only remember the movie version of the story?”
(I already remembered some things, such as the unnecessary change to Faramir’s character which annoyed me and anyone else that I spoke to that had read the books, but exactly how different are the movies?)

I’m half way through The Two Towers now, and I’ve been surprised at some of the things that I didn’t realise or remember had been changed.
One example is Gandalf.  When travelling south in the movie, Gimli insists that they should go through Moria to avoid the gap of Rohan.  Gandalf doesn’t want to, instead attempting to take them over the mountain Caradhras, but they have to turn back because of a storm that Saruman is shown to be whipping up.

In the book, Gandalf is the one that wants to go through Moria; it is Aragorn that doesn’t and insists that they try the mountain road.  They are defeated by the malice of the storm of the mountain itself, Saruman doesn’t conjure it.  When they return down the path Gandalf is glad to go into Moria.

There are a few changes like that dotted around, but it doesn’t annoy me.  For the most part, any changes that the films made I understand why they made.  In a film you have to get the character across quickly, and move the action forward due to being on limited time. 

Another example is if they had included Rohan’s ride towards Isengard.  In the book King Théoden intends to meet Sarurman in open battle, but after the second day of riding Gandalf tells the King to go to Helm’s Deep instead because they are outnumbered.

If that had been done on screen everyone would have been “huh?  Why bother riding that way at all?  It didn’t move the plot forward, and we could have spent screentime on X instead.”
Whereas in the book the time (and word count) is there to explain the reasoning and the thoughts that go along with the actions; it makes sense.

In the end I noticed that it doesn’t matter if a character does something differently, as long as it is consistent within their character.  In the book Gandalf gives his advice based on what he knows to be safer paths; he knows Caradhras is treacherous and his wisdom tells them that to sneak through Moria is a better way.  He gathers information on the way to Isengard and makes the call that to rendezvous at Helm’s Deep is the better option.  In the films the same is true; he knows of the danger of Moria, and so chooses the (safer?) path of Caradhras.  He knows that the horse lords would get trapped in Helm’s Deep, and so advises them to ride out.
Different actions, but the same character; the wise advisor.

That’s why Faramir’s decisions in the movie were disliked, whereas Gandalf’s changes went unnoticed.  Faramir wouldn’t have made those choices based on what we knew the character to be like.

It’s interesting to see that in some circumstances we can believe a character will make an opposite choice and accept it.  So when writing a story if you get stuck and think “what should they do next?” try out the opposite choice.  It might not work (like if you have a nun character who is debating whether to use the medicine or the power of prayer to heal someone, and then try out having them stab the person.  That’s just daft.) but you might find a route that you didn’t think of which works just as well.

Friday, 30 November 2012

I'm still here!

So it’s the last day of November, and the last day of National Novel Writing month!

How did I do?
Well, at first glance, not so well.  My word count as of yesterday evening (ok I know I technically have today too, but I’m not working on the novel today for the sake of a different project which will be revealed soon!) was 28,974.

So that’s an increase of 13,456, which doesn’t seem a huge amount.  Certainly I am nowhere near finishing the first draft; I’m not even half way through the story.

However, it’s not been a total disaster.  Factor in the fact that I had a few days off this month (it was my birthday after all!) and I completely rewrote chapter 2 (losing several thousand words), and I came up with a new direction for one of the characters to take… suddenly it actually seems like solid progress, because the majority of those words were written in this past week.

It’s actually given me a bit of confidence to see the tale begin to take shape, and I’m looking forward to ploughing on.  I want to know how it ends!

I’ve decided I’ll keep doing a bi-weekly word count update.

In the meantime; watch this space!  I have a couple of festive announcements coming up!

Friday, 9 November 2012

It’s National Novel Writing month.



There’s an official site for it and everything.  The idea is that between the dates of the 1st and 30th of November, you write a 50,000 word (or more) novel.
I considered signing up, but one of the rules is that you can’t have started your Novel before November.  I did start typing before then, so I’d either have to start again (which seems a little silly) or write another novel at the same time as this one.  That would be possible; but I also have a little Christmas project on the go, (coming to you in December!) and I don’t want to start getting spread too thinly.
So I’m setting myself my own challenge; to finish the first draft of my novel by the end of November.
Will I make it?  Only time will tell.  But I’m going to try to be honest about my progress, so here’s my first update:  currently I’m sitting at 15,518 words.  Not that far in; but I do have a note book full of story notes, characters, places and plots, which took a good while to put together.

So it’s a race, and winter is coming…